Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Arcturus

moons see clearly
that the stars are so
far away
from each other
like you and I
we have very
different ideas
about all this
solar systems apart
not even in
the same galaxy
you made that clear to
me tonight
and I can barely
see your Red Giant
shining from here
on my
White Dwarf
it's a pity
space is cold

1 comment:

  1. Just a note I made an edit to this today.. changed

    "galaxies apart
    not even in
    the same solar system
    you made that clear to"


    to

    "solar systems apart
    not even in
    the same galaxy
    you made that clear to"


    I felt like it read wrong in term of distance..and actually feels more natural in the flow of the work anyway....

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